Zyael- FINISHED

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Name: Zyael
Gender: Female
Breed: mustang ( if that's alright with you )
Age: 2 1/2
Color:
Height: 16 hands
Eyes: dark brown
Mane/Tail: Black man and tail
Markings: black dorsal stripe on her back
Class:: light (light, neutral, dark)
Personality: Zyael is as what all of the wild mustangs are, completely and wonderfully wild. She has a mild temperment when she's around others when she's first meeting them, although when she's around band stallions she tends to buck a lot because ever since when she was a foal, she had always been herded away from group to group up until she was about 2 years of age did it finally stop. Zyael has learned to live on her own, searching for food in the winter and being near other stallions, even though she was treated so poorly. (100+ words)
History: Zyael was born to a beautiful mare named, Lily and a band stallion named, Jeremiah. As a foal, Zyael learned to fight for what she wanted in life, and to work hard in order to keep herself out of trouble especially when lions, cougars or any other predator would come near the herd. She was always wandering off though, even when she was told to stay within the group. Freedom was something that would was always at the edge of her mind, and she wanted to taste that freedom for sure.
Zyael found herself running towards another part of where her herd was living by. The watering hole that she would run to, would always be full of other wild horses that were somewhat like her, but none that she knew too well. (100+ words)

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is there something that I'm missing.., ??